Question

假設你是李華，請你根據(jù)下列要點，用英文給瑪麗回一封電子郵件，建議她來你所在的學校。理由是：
1．學校每年都接納交換生；
2．學校條件好，各種設施好，有圖書館，電子閱覽室……；
3．課外活動豐富多彩；
4．你校學生英語水平好，易于交流；
5．老師平易近人，教法生動有趣
注意：
1．可根據(jù)要求加以必要發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；
2．詞數(shù)為120左右；
3．電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計入你所寫詞數(shù)）。
參考詞匯：設施：facility  電子閱覽室：electro – reading – room
Hi Mary.
Nice to read your e – mail today.
As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should recommend …
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Hope you’ll like my school                                                                      
Li Hua

Answer 1

Hi Mary,                                                                     
Nice to read your e-mail today.                                              
As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should recommend my school. The followings are the reasons.
First, exchange students are welcomed in my school; besides, we have first-class facilities: the labs, modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students, offering us places to broaden our views while on the sports grounds and in gymnasiums we surely can get much fun and make many friends. After-class we have varies of activities which provide us with opportunities to improve ourselves. And the most important is that we have the best teachers as well as the best schoolmates. The teachers are kind and ready to offer help, whose unique ways of teaching help make their class lively and interesting. We students are encouraged to speak English both in and out of class, thus I do believe that you won’t have any difficulty in communicating with us.
Hope you’ll like my school                                                                      
Li Hua

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。
點評：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。