Question

短文寫(xiě)作（共1題；滿(mǎn)分30分）
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
Sink or Swim - There is Always a Choice!
注意：① 無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
② 除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③ 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
④ 詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

On my way home, I saw my classmate Lee fight with another boy. I thought it was none of my business. I was about to pass by like a stranger when I heard Lee’s cry for help. I made an immediate decision to run to stop the fight and warned them that if they continued I would report to the police. They stopped at once. After I found why they fought I persuaded them to make up in case there would be further accidents. After all, their cause of fight wasn’t worth mentioning. The realized their childish behavior and apologized to each other.
When you in a dilemma, you have to decide whether you want to sink or swim. There is always a choice you know. Choose wisely, it is your life.

試題分析：考察開(kāi)放性短文寫(xiě)作。本文的寫(xiě)作話(huà)題是Sink or Swim - There is Always a Choice!
指在我們的人生指，總是有著很多的選擇，考生可以選取自己的生活指的一個(gè)具體的事例來(lái)敘述該情況。如看見(jiàn)有人作弊，是報(bào)告老師還是就當(dāng)沒(méi)有看見(jiàn)。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：開(kāi)放性作文只給出了一個(gè)話(huà)題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。