Question

目前地球面臨水資源危機(jī)， 請(qǐng)你以Global Shortage of Fresh Water 為題，根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。
提示：1. 人們以為淡水是取之不盡的（雨水，河水，井水……）
2. 實(shí)際上淡水是非常緊缺的（人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染……）
3. 人類應(yīng)該怎么辦？
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右。
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Global Shortage of Fresh Water
Many people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up. They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use. Such an opinion leads to shocking waste of water.
As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water. Furthermore, with rapid growth of the world’s population, the rising demand for water by industry, and the serious pollution of our surroundings, the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water. Actually, in some big cities, fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.
Therefore, to find new ways to save water is an urgent task. First, we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water. Second, scientists must work even harder to purify sea water and polluted water, and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容大部分已經(jīng)給出，在“人類應(yīng)該怎么辦？”這一部分進(jìn)行展開(kāi)，要通過(guò)嚴(yán)格的法律，科學(xué)家要努力進(jìn)行海水的淡化等等。寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶āＰ枰�注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。