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美國(guó)已故大演說(shuō)家、”成功學(xué)家鼻祖”羅曼·文森特·皮爾有一句名言：”Attitude Is Everything”。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)創(chuàng)碛姓�確的人生態(tài)度的重要性,詞數(shù)120左右。

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As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. If we take a positive attitude and keep on trying , we will achieve our goals in the end.
I can’t agree more with this view. At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed. Then I realized that I had to do well in English to go to my favorite university. I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me. With my teacher’s help, I improved my English gradually.
My story shows that if we have a good attitude and keep on trying, we will be able to overcome difficulty and move on. It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文主題明確，夾敘夾議，在語(yǔ)言上用了一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)：can’t agree more with不能再同意了，take a positive attitude采取積極的態(tài)度， With my teacher’s help 在老師的幫助下，句式上也是富有變化：As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed.和I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me., 這兩句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句。