Question

假如你是李華。 請根據(jù)寫作要點用英語寫一篇周記，記述你周末幫家人做家務的一次經(jīng)歷。
寫作要點：
1. 做家務的理由；2. 做家務的過程；3. 你的感受。、
注意：1. 短文字數(shù)不少于100；
2. 開頭部分已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總次數(shù)；
3. 不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱
I am an 18-year-old middle school student. ____________________________________

Answer 1

I’m an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.
At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I would see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy. 

試題分析：考查提綱類作文寫作，重點考查考生的書面表達的能力。做家務的話題應該是中學生熟悉，有話可寫的素材，因此難度并不大。題目以周記的形式展現(xiàn)，要求考生先介紹做家務的理由，再介紹做家務的過程，最后寫出自己的感受。考生在寫作時，一定要緊扣寫作要點進行寫作，三個要點都十分重要，如果考生能夠在緊扣寫作要點的基礎(chǔ)上，抓住語言的準確性，再寫出幾個亮點詞匯和句式，得到高分應該比較輕松。
【亮點說明】Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.這句話是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? 這句話用了同位語從句， I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. 這句話里面用了詞組：put sth in place把…布置得井井有條， Tired as I was, I never felt so happy. 這句話用了倒裝句，還有文章用了Firstly， After that這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。