Question

有消息稱(chēng)北京2016年高考英語(yǔ)考試總分將山150分降至100分，其中聽(tīng)力50分；實(shí)行一年考兩次的方式；學(xué)生可多次參考，并以最好成績(jī)計(jì)入高考總分，成績(jī)3年有效。人們對(duì)此有不同的看法，例如：

請(qǐng)你就這件事發(fā)表白己的看法并說(shuō)明理山。短文內(nèi)容要求：
1、簡(jiǎn)略陳述事件；
2、表明自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)：
3、簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由（可參考上表）。
注意：詞數(shù)100～120。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。
It is reported that the weighting of English in Beijing's College Entrance Examination will be

Answer 1

It is reported that the weighting of English in Beijing's College Entrance Examination will be reduced by a third to 100 points, in which the listening test will take up 50%. The test will be conducted twice a year. Students can sit for it for several times and the best result is taken as the final score, which will be valid for 3years.
In my opinion, It is a worthwhile reform since many students can benefit from it. As is a fact, the subject of English has been such heavy pressure that many students even ignore their native language learning, Therefore, this change in testing can not only reduce the students’ burden, but also correct their attitude towards language learning,. With more freedom to arrange their own studies, students will learn English better as well as other subjects.      

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀(guān)點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是對(duì)北京2016年高考英語(yǔ)考試的不同觀(guān)點(diǎn)，題目給出了一些要點(diǎn)，也要考生給出自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是一些同學(xué)反對(duì)的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，然后是贊同的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，還有無(wú)所謂的態(tài)度，最后是自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，要求觀(guān)點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢，多用詞組和句型：sit for參加考試， In my opinion在我看來(lái), benefit from受益于，not only but also 不但…而且…，It is reported that the weighting of English in Beijing's College Entrance Examination will be reduced by a third to 100 points, in which the listening test will take up 50%.這句話(huà)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， As is a fact, the subject of English has been such heavy pressure that many students even ignore their native language learning,這句話(huà)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和so…that句型， With more freedom to arrange their own studies, students will learn English better as well as other subjects.這句話(huà)用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。