Question

近年微博(microblog)在中國越來越流行。假設(shè)你是校報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示為校報(bào)寫一篇介紹微博的英語短文，寫作要點(diǎn)：
微博為我們生活所帶來的的便利等優(yōu)點(diǎn)
微博的缺點(diǎn)
個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)或建議。
注意：詞數(shù)80字以上；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feeling instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。我們所要做的就是把已給中文內(nèi)容翻譯成英文。需要注意文中要點(diǎn)缺一不可。另外注意不要偏離文章中心，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合文章內(nèi)容。要求句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章使用了關(guān)聯(lián)詞：Besides, However,還使用了很好的短語和句子：give away 泄漏，All in all總之, provides us with提供某人某物， as well as和…也…， It is very convenient for people to express their feeling instantly at any time. it provides a chance for people to release their stress. 這兩句話都用了it做形式主語， microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.這句話用了省略句。