Question

班級要開學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流會, 班長讓你根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)驗(yàn)的發(fā)言稿:
課前預(yù)習(xí)；
課堂活動；
課后作業(yè)；
其他學(xué)習(xí)方法（至少兩項(xiàng)）。
注意：1. 文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 詞數(shù)：120左右；
3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Boys and girls,
I feel honored to say something about learning English here.                           

Answer 1

Boys and girls,
I feel honored to say something about learning English here. In learning English, I think we should preview the lessons that the teacher will teach before class, making marks where we have questions. And in class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. After class, it is better to finish our homework on time.
In our spare time, we must pay attention to our notes. We should write down what the teacher have taught us and keep the notes in good order.
When we have problems in learning English, we must turn to the teacher for help.  It is very useful to learn good sentences by heart. It is also important to read aloud and read more English articles.
May you study well.   
That’s all.   Thank you.  

試題分析：這是一篇發(fā)言稿，所以在語言的使用上要大眾化，話題是關(guān)于“學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)驗(yàn)”動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。并且注意字?jǐn)?shù)限制，另外注意題目的要求，按照順序去寫，注意不要有遺漏。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡略,故需要充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容，需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式。此外還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句子串聯(lián)起來，使文章更加連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)語言自然流暢，段落清楚，層次分明。在本文中作者使用了一些好的詞組和句型：In our spare time在我們的空閑時(shí)間, pay attention to注意， have problems in doing 做…有困難，turn to the teacher for help向…求助， learn sth by heart 記住，In learning English, I think we should preview the lessons that the teacher will teach before class, making marks where we have questions. 這句話用了定語從句，非謂語動詞和地點(diǎn)狀語從句， After class, it is better to finish our homework on time這句話用了it做形式主語，.We should write down what the teacher have taught us and keep the notes in good order. 這句話用了賓語從句， May you study well.這句話用了虛擬語氣。