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注意:詞數(shù)為100左右。

Dear editor,
Now, more and more students are getting fond of western fast food, and thus they take in too much sugar and fat. I don’t think it good for their health.
There are all kinds of foods in the world. Which one is healthier, the Chinese food or the western fast food? Different people have different choices.
In my opinion, the Chinese food is healthier. Firstly, the Chinese food contains a lot of fruit and green vegetables. It is rich in fiber and low in sugar and fat. Secondly, the Chinese food is very delicious and has many dishes. It is nice to taste. I think it is the healthiest in the world. So many Chinese people can keep fit and have white teeth.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析:考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。請(qǐng)你給21世紀(jì)報(bào)社寫(xiě)信,反映你對(duì)當(dāng)今學(xué)生飲食的看法,要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出,書(shū)信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括,不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱,考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié),不要逐字逐句翻譯,同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序,運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文,同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言,運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型,可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái),這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章中表達(dá)的時(shí)候使用了詞組和句型:get fond of 喜歡,take in 攝入, keep fit 保持健康。I don’t think it good for their health.這句話用了否定前移和it做形式賓語(yǔ), In my opinion, 在我看來(lái),be rich in富含…,It is nice to taste.這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ),也適當(dāng)使用了關(guān)聯(lián)詞:Firstly, Secondly,
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