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I was pushed into writing the "Top ten problems teenagers face" after I attended a school program, where I had the opportunity to interact with many teenagers. Each conversation was only adding one more item to the list of problems.
About two thirds of girls in Grades Nine to Twelve "worry about their appearance." While there were no gender differences in worries about school, girls worry about getting along with parents and what to do when they are older. Girls are proven to worry more about personal problems, romantic relationships, being liked by other kids and being concerned about what kind of person they are. In fact, the only thing boys worry about more than girls is succeeding in their physical activities.
What parents need is to look at ways to help teens and take responsibility for what we are exposing our teens to right now. We cannot afford to ignore the parental duties of bringing them up well from the time they are little. Televisions, computers and other gadgets that they spend most of the time on cannot give them the nurturing that only parents can.
【寫作內(nèi)容】以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

Answer 1

When interacting with teenagers, the writer found teenagers, especially young girls, have different worries. The author suggests that parents should play their part in helping teens get away from worries.

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。對學(xué)生的概括能力要求很高，認(rèn)真看清題目要求，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文很精確的歸納了原文，而且在短短的30個字中，包含了詞組play their part in 在…方面起著作用，和get away from遠(yuǎn)離，以及橘子： When interacting with teenagers, the writer found teenagers, especially young girls, have different worries. 這句話用了省略句，The author suggests that parents should play their part in helping teens get away from worries.這句話用了虛擬語氣。