Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
Failure is the mother of success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees.
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
④詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

 
As an old saying goes, failure is the mother of success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees, without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go.  Although failure is annoying, as long as we face it bravely, we will succeed sooner or later.
There was once a time when I had difficulty in math. However hard I tried, my math grade was still bad. Later, I failed to pass an important examination. Before I decided to give up, it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson. What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely. Knowing the importance of failure, I was not afraid of math. Finally, my math grades improved.
Taking my experience into conclusion, everyone can conquer the unavoidable failure in our life so long as we have faith in ourselves. Treasure the failure, and you will win the treasure.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。Failure is the mother of success. What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees.就失敗乃成功之母為話題寫(xiě)一篇作文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】What failure to us is what sunshine to the trees, without which we cannot arrive at the place where we hope to go.這里含有兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句；Before I decided to give up, it was my math teacher who gave me a hand and told me that failure could also teach us a lesson.這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句和一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句。What she told me encouraged me to face with my math problem bravely.這里含有一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句。