Question

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的城市舉辦，你們學(xué)校招募志愿者。請根據(jù)以下要點給校長寫一封自薦信。
愛好體育；2 英語好，擅長交際；3，樂于助人。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；
信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)；
可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Headmaster,
I am more than excited to hear that the Asian Winter Games will be held in our city.__________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,
I am more than excited to hear that the Asian winter Games will be held in our city. And I strongly hope to be accepted as a volunteer for the games.
I am a student of Senior Three. I am fond of sports, and most of my spare time is spent on the playground with my friends. Of all my subjects at school, English is y favourite one , so I’m sure I can be of some help to foreign players during the games. And I can communicate with them after the game, for example , introducing our city to them. I’m outgoing and I am always ready to help others.
Hope the games to be a great success.
Hope I will be chosen to be one of the volunteers.
Yours
Li Hua

試題分析：考查半開放性作文，本文只是給出了一個大致的內(nèi)容要點，要求考生自己添加，要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。
點評：半開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。