Question

以“Teenagers Should Form a Good Habit”為題，寫(xiě)一篇120個(gè)詞左右的短文。要求言之有理，內(nèi)容連貫。
要點(diǎn)提示；
1. 我們要養(yǎng)成一個(gè)什么好習(xí)慣；
2. 為什么要養(yǎng)成這個(gè)好習(xí)慣；
3. 我們?nèi)绾勿B(yǎng)成這個(gè)好習(xí)慣。

Answer 1

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Just as a saying goes, sow a thought, reap an action; sow an action, reap a habit; sow a habit, reap a character; sow a character, reap a destiny. Apparently, it’s significant that teenagers should form many good habits, among which the most important one in my view is to get up early.
Getting up early is beneficial to teenagers’ physical, mental and emotional development. For one thing, it can’t be denied that the fresh air in the morning does good to our health. Thus, doing sports at this time is a fine choice. For another, morning is the best time for us to memorize quickly and easily after a good rest at night. Furthermore, it can shape your character, for it needs perseverance for us to get up early, especially in the winter morning.
To get up early, you’d better go to bed early and set yourself an alarm in case you might oversleep. Once you’ve formed the good habit, getting up early will become part of your daily routines naturally.

試題分析：考生應(yīng)理解寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的，注意時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，尤其是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要把握準(zhǔn)確到位，這是半開(kāi)放性作文，要點(diǎn)需要考生拿捏準(zhǔn)確以及正確，這加大了寫(xiě)作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒?jí)句式和高級(jí)詞匯，以提高書(shū)面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：首先，看清答題要求，尤其是“寫(xiě)作要求”后的具體要求，并在答題中一直自始至終貫徹其要求。應(yīng)避免句式過(guò)于單一呆板，應(yīng)該有長(zhǎng)有短、錯(cuò)落有致；有抑有揚(yáng)，使文章有很強(qiáng)的節(jié)奏感，這就要求懂得靈活運(yùn)用富于變化的各種句式。例如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、恰到好處的被動(dòng)句、高級(jí)的定語(yǔ)從句、what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句等。