Question

隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來越多的人擁有了自己的汽車。你班同學(xué)就此展開討論，提出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)和看法。請你根據(jù)所提供的信息給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀介紹這兩種看法。

學(xué)生	觀點(diǎn)
贊同者	1．方便、快捷、舒適的交通工具； 2．反映出國民生活條件提高，國家富強(qiáng)； 3．帶動其他行業(yè)發(fā)展。
反對者	1．廢氣污染嚴(yán)重； 2．汽車過多影響交通，導(dǎo)致更多事故； 3．停車問題日益突出。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars．
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Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

With the development of people’s living conditions, more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car. Firstly, it’s a convenient, fast, and comfortable means of transportation. Secondly, it shows that people are becoming richer, and the country much more stronger. It also makes relative businesses and industries develop faster.
Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents. Besides, overloaded parking cars is another big problem.
In my view, people should think carefully before they buy a car.

試題分析：本篇寫作題材是對于越來越多的人擁有了自己的汽車的兩種不同觀點(diǎn)。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，四段：第一段為總述；第二段正方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第三段反方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；第四段自己觀點(diǎn)。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語言多樣化；2.自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)時(shí)要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章很明顯的特點(diǎn)是關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用：Firstly, Secondly, Besides。詞組有：give off 排放，In my view在我看來，have some bad effects 有壞的影響，句式比較簡單：Some of us think it’s good to own a car. 這句話用了it做形式主語。