Question

假定你是李華。最近衡水的霧霾（ smog）嚴(yán)重地影響了人們的生活。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給校報(bào)寫一篇稿件。
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．霧霾帶來的危害；
2．你的建議；
3．你的希望。
注意：  1．短文詞數(shù)120 左右；
2．開頭部分已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
3．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
Recently Heng Shui has often seen the heavy smog weather, which has done great harm to our daily life．
                                                                                      
                                                                           

Answer 1

One possible version:
Recently Heng Shui has often seen the heavy smog weather, which has done great harm to our daily life. Due to the heavy smog many traffic accidents happened, and some people got injured and some even lost their lives. Besides, more and more people who are suffering symptoms related to smog have to go to see the doctor.
Now that we have realized the great harm caused by the smog, we should take measures to reduce the smog. It is vital to make it by educating people especially factory owners to raise their awareness of protecting the environment. People should go to work by bus or by bike if possible instead of driving and plant more trees to absorb and clean the polluted air. Only in this way can we save ourselves from the smog.
I sincerely hope all the citizens in Heng Shui can work together to do something to save the air we breathe every day

試題分析：考查半開放性作文寫作,半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中應(yīng)用一些常見的短語(yǔ)和句子：do great harm to對(duì)…..有害； Due to由于； lost their lives.失去生命；take measures to采取措施做某事； instead of而不是。Recently Heng Shui has often seen the heavy smog weather, which has done great harm to our daily life.這個(gè)句子中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。Now that we have realized the great harm caused by the smog, we should take measures to reduce the smog.這個(gè)句子中now that是連詞既然。Only in this way can we save ourselves from the smog.這個(gè)句子用了倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。