Question

當(dāng)前，“酒后駕車”成了人們熱議的話題。請你根據(jù)以下提示對“酒后駕車”談?wù)剛�(gè)人看法：
1．“酒后駕車”的危害。如：引發(fā)交通事故，造成交通阻塞，構(gòu)成生命危險(xiǎn)，
造成財(cái)產(chǎn)損失等。
2．你的建議。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；  
2．開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.
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Answer 1

Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.
As is known to us all, drinking and driving is a sort of terrible behavior that will threaten the safety of people, including the driver himself. Many of the traffic accidents caused by drinking and driving have brought about traffic jams, injuries and even death. Besides, a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars, which means a waste of money.
I strongly suggest effective measures be taken before things get worse. Laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drinking and driving. Meanwhile, the public, especially drivers, should be more aware of public safety. I hope by doing so, drinking and driving can be things of past.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是對酒后駕駛的現(xiàn)象，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要求敘述現(xiàn)狀并寫出自己的建議，因此本文必須用第一人稱。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如a heated topic，As is known to us all, including，be aware of 等，還運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：Meanwhile, besides等等。