Question

你在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上讀到一篇關(guān)于“90后”的英語文章，你打算以“Post 90's Generation”為題，用第一人稱給《二十一世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：

“90后”的缺點(diǎn)	“90后”的優(yōu)點(diǎn)	你自己的感受
1.依賴性強(qiáng)； 2.自私； 3.貪圖過舒適的生活等。	1.渴望了解周圍的世界； 2.思想獨(dú)立； 3.有很多新觀念等。	……

注意：
1．必須包括表格中的所有內(nèi)容；
2．為了使文章通順完整，可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；
3．詞數(shù)：100-120左右。
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Answer 1

Post­90's Generation
We, post­90's generation, are living in a society full of fiercer competition, and developing our special manners and values, which has raised people's concern.
It's true that the post­90's generations have some weaknesses. Some of us, for example, rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives. Some are even selfish and care little for others.
At the same time, the post­90's generations desire to learn more about the world around us, and we are independent in thinking. We always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas.
I think the post­90's generation should carry forward our strong points and overcome the weaknesses, and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是人們對90后的評價(jià)，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。但本文必須用第一人稱。再有就是應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如full of，rely on，care for，be independentin，keep up with等和It is true that…句型等。還運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句等。并注意了句子的銜接如：at the same time，for example等等。