Question

假如你叫王華，你收到你的英國(guó)筆友Tom的一封信，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)內(nèi)容給他回一封信。
Dear Wang Hua,
How are you going on recently? I’m glad to tell you that I have planned to go to Zunyi Teachers’ College to study Chinese soon．Could you please give me some advice on how to learn Chinese well?
Write back soon．
Tom
要點(diǎn)包括：（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）
1．在課堂上要專心聽(tīng)講，做好筆記。
2．在課外要大膽開(kāi)口，盡量找機(jī)會(huì)與當(dāng)?shù)厝私涣�，勤記常用詞和習(xí)語(yǔ)，提高聽(tīng)力。
3．科學(xué)合理的安排好時(shí)間，多加練習(xí)。
Dear Tom,                                                                     
     I’m so happy to learn that                                                    
                                                                          _   
Yours,
Wang Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m so hapy to learn that you want to learn Chinese in Zunyi Teachers’ College here．There is no doubt that to learn Chinese well is by no means an easy thing, but I have some ideas that may help．
Firstly, it is important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes so that you can go over your lessons later．Secondly, try to practise speaking Chinese as much as possible out of class and write down whatever you hear to accunulate more commonly-used words and idioms．Don’t be afraid of making mistakes．And try to communicate with local people to develop your listening ability．Last but not least, you should organize your time and do lots of exercise．
I think the most important thing is that you should believe in yourself．I’m sure that you will suceed after your hard work．
Yours,
Wang Hua

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。假如你叫王華，你收到你的英國(guó)筆友Tom的一封信，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)內(nèi)容給他回一封信。要點(diǎn)包括：（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）1．在課堂上要專心聽(tīng)講，做好筆記。
2．在課外要大膽開(kāi)口，盡量找機(jī)會(huì)與當(dāng)?shù)厝私涣鳎�勤記常用詞和習(xí)語(yǔ)，提高聽(tīng)力。3．科學(xué)合理的安排好時(shí)間，多加練習(xí)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I’m so hapy to learn that you want to learn Chinese in Zunyi Teachers’ College here．這里含有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句；I think the most important thing is that you should believe in yourself．這里含有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句和一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句。