Question

有統(tǒng)計(jì)資料顯示，今年春節(jié)期間，全國(guó)發(fā)送短信170億條。有關(guān)短信拜年用“原創(chuàng)”還是“克�。ㄈ喊l(fā)）”的爭(zhēng)論很多。一種觀點(diǎn)懷疑“克�。ㄈ喊l(fā)）短信”拜年的真誠(chéng)度，另一種觀點(diǎn)則與之相反，認(rèn)為不管短信是否是原創(chuàng)，祝福也一樣真誠(chéng)。請(qǐng)結(jié)合這一現(xiàn)象，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100——120字的短文，發(fā)表你的看法。
注：短信text message   克隆的cloned
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Answer 1

Statistics show Chinese sent 17 bin text messages during Spring Festival．People hold different views about exchanging greetings by text message．Some think it's better to use original text messages instead of “cloned ones”．In my opinion．it doesn’t matter much whether text messages are original or not．
It’s acceptable to deliver the same message to a group of people．To mark the Year of Horse in 2014，plenty of messages were witty remarks using “ ma ”，or horse in Chinese，as a homophone to tease recipients for fun or to convey humorous greetings．Actually, text messages are just kind signals to bless you．If one cares too much about the originality of text messages, he misunderstands the motive of others．After a11, it is truly heartfelt greetings not where the greetings are from that really count．

試題分析：這是一篇半開(kāi)放式作文，開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，討論有關(guān)短信拜年用“原創(chuàng)”還是“克�。ㄈ喊l(fā)）”的爭(zhēng)論，給出了正反方的觀點(diǎn)，考生首先要予以交代。但是重點(diǎn)還是要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容要考生自己寫(xiě)，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文主旨明確，語(yǔ)句通順，使用了短語(yǔ)以及多變的句式：如： In my opinion在我看來(lái)．After all畢竟， Some think it's better to use original text messages instead of “cloned ones”．這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， it doesn’t matter much whether text messages are original or not．這句話用了主語(yǔ)從句和it做形式主語(yǔ)，To mark the Year of Horse in 2014，plenty of messages were witty remarks using “ ma ”，or horse in Chinese，as a homophone to tease recipients for fun or to convey humorous greetings．這句話用了不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)， it is truly heartfelt greetings not where the greetings are from that really count．這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句。