Question

假設你是李華，你的新西蘭筆友Nick將于8月來四川旅游，特來信詢問有關(guān)旅游景點的情況。請根據(jù)下表所提供的要點，寫一封回信，并表示盼望他的到來。

旅游資源	許多世界著名的風景名勝，如九寨溝（湖：清澈見底；色彩斑斕）都江堰水利工程（2000多年歷史；仍在發(fā)揮作用）
相關(guān)信息	氣候適宜；交通方便

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式及開頭已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。
2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3. 參考詞匯：省份-province  湖-lake  都江堰水利工程-Dujiangyan Irrigation Project
Dear Nick,
I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to Sichuan in August.                                      
                                                                                  
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                
                                                                                  
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                     
Yours sincerely，                                                    
Li Hu

Answer 1

Dear Nick,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August. You’ve made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lake of which the water is clear and looks colourful. It can excite visitors’ imagination. Another attraction is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It was built over 2, 000 years ago and it still plays an important part in irrigation today. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I’m sure you will have a good time.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一封回信，內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)給出，學生切入容易。要求學生寫作內(nèi)容要完全覆蓋中文要點，靈活使用各種句型和詞匯，避免中文式表達，在描述的過程中可適當增添相關(guān)信息，使文章更加飽滿自然。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。恰當?shù)倪B詞的使用可以增加文章的連貫性。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，不拖拉，使用很多好的短語：made the wise choice 做出明智的決定，be rich in富含，tourist attractions 旅游景點， places of interest名勝, play an important part in 在…方面起著重要的作用，還有這句話用了定語從句，Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lake of which the water is clear and looks colourful.還有文章使用了Besides,使文章更加連貫。