Question

假定你是李華,自制了一些中國(guó)結(jié)(Chinese knot)。給開網(wǎng)店的美國(guó)朋友Tom寫封信,請(qǐng)他代賣,要點(diǎn)包括:
1.外觀(尺寸、顏色、材料)    2.象征意義     3.價(jià)格
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? 
                                                                                                                                                               
                                                                                                                                                               
                                                                                                                                                   
             
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red still threads, cloths and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是對(duì)學(xué)生日常生活中存在的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要求讓你給校長(zhǎng)寫信，因此本文必須用第一人稱。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子、句型為文章增色不少，比如I wonder if…, in the shape of, stand for, 還運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句，if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，并注意了句子的銜接如： also，either…or….等等。