Question

假設(shè)而是李華，剛剛收到英國(guó)筆友Andy給你寄來的生日禮物。
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示給Andy寫一封電子郵件。
1．表達(dá)誠(chéng)摯的謝意；2．詢問Andy的近況；;3．祝Andy學(xué)業(yè)進(jìn)步。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2。可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Andy,
                                                                           
Yours,

Answer 1

Dear Andy,
You really gave me a nice surprise on my big day, Thank you so much for your gift．I love it!
How is everything going with you? What are you studying? If you have time, please write to me about your classmates, your teachers and the interesting activities in your school． I’d like to know everything in your high school life． I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Thanks again for your wonderful gift． Best wishes for good health and great success in your studies．
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。