Question

一個(gè)來(lái)自美國(guó)的參觀(guān)團(tuán)要到你的家鄉(xiāng)來(lái)參觀(guān)考察。假設(shè)你是他們的導(dǎo)游，請(qǐng)口頭向外國(guó)朋友們介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)。要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 自然資源豐富，盛產(chǎn)蘋(píng)果。人口有500多萬(wàn)，其中50%是教師、工人、機(jī)關(guān)工作人員等；
2 自2000年以來(lái)工業(yè)發(fā)展迅猛，擁有一個(gè)近十萬(wàn)人口的開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)；
3. 人們重視教育，40%的人受過(guò)高等教育。建有50多所中學(xué)，200多所小學(xué);
4. 交通便利，有一個(gè)火車(chē)站、一個(gè)國(guó)際機(jī)場(chǎng)和一個(gè)港口，連接國(guó)內(nèi)外主要城市;
5. 可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。
注意：1、要求語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容連貫；2、字?jǐn)?shù)100—120 ；3、開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。
Welcome to our hometown for an inspection. …
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Welcome to our hometown for an inspection. Our hometown is beautiful and rich in natural resources. It has a population of more than 5 million, about 50 percent of which are workers, teachers, government workers and so on. A great number of good-qualified apples are produced here.
Great changes have taken place since 2000. Industry is developing the fastest and an economic development zone with a population of about 100,000 has already been built. People pay great attention to education and it is developing rapidly. There are more than 50 middle schools and 200 primary schools. About 40 percent of the citizens have received high education. People’s life has greatly improved.
A railway station, a port and an international airport connect all the main cities of home and abroad, playing an important role in the development of economy.

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點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。