Question

 假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，偶然看到在你市求學(xué)的美國(guó)學(xué)生Tom在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖，要大家給他推薦一本學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的書(shū)。你手頭正好有一本合適的書(shū)可以借給他。請(qǐng)你給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，要點(diǎn)如下：
1．說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信原因；  
2．描述書(shū)的情況；  
3．約定見(jiàn)面時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)：120 -150； 
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tom,    
I'm Ii Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School._______________________________ 
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Best wishes.             
Yours             
Li Hua 

Answer 1

Dear Tom,     
I’m Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. The other day, I learned quite by chance that you were in need of a book to help you improve your Chinese. I happen to have one, which I think might help you.     
The book, entitled New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level. Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs. Edited by three language experts, it has been popular with the readers ever since it came out two years ago.    
If it is convenient to you, let’s meet at 3 pm. this Sunday at the entrance to the People’s Park, where I can give you the book face to face. If not, try to find another time that is suitable for both of us. 

試題分析：本文是書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，要求用英語(yǔ)給湯姆發(fā)一封電子郵，給他推薦一本學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的書(shū)。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，但不是很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)全交代，不能有遺漏。而且要拓展內(nèi)容，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。因?yàn)槭菚?shū)信，所以本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組： The other day“幾天前”, by chance“偶然”. be intended for “意圖是”。還有一個(gè)很大的特點(diǎn)，這篇文章的句型多變，也適當(dāng)應(yīng)用了高中所學(xué)的重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)： I happen to have one, which I think might help you.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，   The book, entitled New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level. 這句話用來(lái)了過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)，Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句和倒裝句，Edited by three language experts, it has been popular with the readers ever since it came out two years ago. 這句話用了過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)，    If it is convenient to you, let’s meet at 3 pm. this Sunday at the entrance to the People’s Park, where I can give you the book face to face.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， If not, try to find another time that is suitable for both of us. 
這句話用了省略句。