Question

網(wǎng)購已成為很多人青睞的一種現(xiàn)代購物形式。請你以“Online Shopping”為題，根據(jù)以下三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，分三段寫一篇100字左右的英語短文，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)購現(xiàn)象及你的看法或建議
1.越來越多的人喜歡在網(wǎng)上購買商品
2.網(wǎng)上購物可能存在的問題(如：假貨；貨物損壞；不易退換)
3.你的看法或建議
注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞匯：網(wǎng)店店主Internet shopping provider  假貨fake goods
Online Shopping
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Answer 1

Online Shopping
Nowadays, shopping through the Internet has become increasingly popular among us, and many young people prefer to buy almost everything they want online.
Online shopping, however, can sometimes bring headaches to people when they enjoy shopping online. Firstly, the quality of the goods may not be as good as they are described.Secondly, it is possible for the buyers to buy fake goods. In addition, some people find it very hard to make a change when they are not satisfied with the things bought online.
I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out for the Internet shopping providers. If so, I believe a promising life of online shopping is just awaiting us.
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試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文給出的文字提示不多，很多要點(diǎn)需要考生自己組織，網(wǎng)上購物的問題可以從服裝不合身；假貨成堆；難以退換等角度展開；個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)可以從加強(qiáng)網(wǎng)上購物的法律規(guī)則，加強(qiáng)監(jiān)管等方面仔細(xì)描述。。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。