Question

書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)
假如你叫李華，你的英國筆友John來信詢問你對即將來臨的暑假的活動安排。請根據(jù)表格中的信息給他回信，說明你在暑假中的活動計(jì)劃和理由。

活動	理由
休息	減少壓力，恢復(fù)精力
讀書	獲取知識，上學(xué)深造
上網(wǎng)	收集信息，交流思想
打工	接觸社會，學(xué)會獨(dú)立
旅游	欣賞自然，呼吸新鮮空氣

注意：
開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
詞數(shù)150左右。
Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. And it’s a pleasure to tell you
                                                                             
                                                                              
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. And it’s a pleasure to tell you how I’ll spend the coming summer holidays.
First, I’ll have a good rest so that I can reduce my heavy study pressure and recover my energy. Of course, I’ll spend much time reading in the holidays because I think reading can enrich my knowledge and prepare myself for my further studies. Besides, I intend to make use of my time to surf the Internet. For one thing, I can collect necessary information on line. For another, I can share ideas with my friends in every corner of the world. At the same time, I’ll choose to do some part-time jobs. On one hand, I can put myself in touch with society. On the other hand, I can learn to be independent. What’s more, I’ll have a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air. What will you do in your summer holidays? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
 

試題分析：：考查表格類作文的寫作。是關(guān)于你的英國筆友John來信詢問你對即將來臨的暑假的活動安排。請根據(jù)表格中的信息給他回信，說明你在暑假中的活動計(jì)劃和理由，具體信息是以表格的形式給出，考點(diǎn)只需要適當(dāng)串聯(lián)即可，在寫作的時(shí)候一定要使用合適的連接詞來連接全文，讓文章成為一個整體，同時(shí)要注意使用英語句型，也要使用倒裝句，定語從句等特殊的句式來提高文章的多樣性。如I’ll have a good rest so that I can reduce my heavy study pressure and recover my energy.It is high time we realized the potential causes of traffic accidents and acted to prevent them.還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句與句連起來，如：for one thing,for another thing;on one hand, on the other hand 等
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于表格類作文，此類作文雖然好寫，但是要寫出特色是很不容易的。關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫作的時(shí)候運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)方式，讓句子有變化。