Question

書面表達(dá)（共25分）。
假設(shè)你是李華。你的朋友Tom打算來重慶游玩，來之前想讓你先給他寫封信介紹一下重慶。請你根據(jù)下列提示給他寫一封信。
1．地理位置：中國西南部
2．占地面積：八萬多平方公里
3．人口：三千多萬
4．著名景點：大足石刻（the Dazu Rock Carvings）,長江三峽（the Three Gorges）等。
5．重慶是現(xiàn)代化大都市。。。。。
注意：1，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。  2，詞數(shù)100左右
Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to hear that you are going to visit Chongqing.__________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to hear that you are going to visit Chongqing.Chongqing, where the Yangtze River and Jialing River meet, is situated in the southwest of China. Covering an area of over 80,000 square kilometers, it has a population of more than thirty million. Besides, there are many world famous places of interest, such as the Dazu Rock Carvings, the Three Gorges, which attract millions of tourists from all over the world. Nowadays, Chongqing, which is developing with high speed, is the biggest international city in China in terms of area and population. People here are very kind, warm and friendly to every visitor from any corner of the world. I believe you will enjoy your visit in Chongqing.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。同時也屬于提綱類作文，向你的朋友Tom寫封信介紹一下重慶。要點都已經(jīng)給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述時可以以要點時為順序，也可以適當(dāng)加工要點，但運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文里面的where the Yangtze River and Jialing River meet, is situated in the southwest of China. 和Covering an area of over 80,000 square kilometers, it has a population of more than thirty million.都不失為好句子。
點評：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。