Question

學(xué)校英語論壇針對(duì)目前城市交通擁堵、污染嚴(yán)重的問題進(jìn)行了“治堵方案大家談”的討論。以下是討論概要。

【寫作內(nèi)容】請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上概要寫一篇短文，包括以下內(nèi)容：
1、存在的問題；     2、解決的方案；      3、方案的好處。
【寫作要求】只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Answer 1

Version 1
Nowadays, the problem of traffic jams in cities is as serious as that of air pollution. Some suggested solutions to these problems include a reduction in the use of private cars and an increase in the practice of car-pooling, where one car is shared by several workmates or friends. In addition, the government could improve the public transport system in order to make it more convenient for people. The government should also encourage cycling by building more green lanes. This will help save money, time and energy as well as improve the environment.
Version 2
The problems of traffic jams and air pollution have aroused increasing attention recently. Some of the possible solutions to these problems are as follows. First, car owners could share their cars with their friends and workmates, thus reducing the use of private cars. Second, the government could make it more convenient for its citizens to use public transport by improving the public transport system and encourage cycling by building more green lanes. By taking the above measures, we could surely save money, time and energy as well as improve the environment.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。