Question

假如你是李華，于11月12日到達紐約，然后去找你的美國朋友Tom, 但他不在家。請按以下內(nèi)容給Tom 留張便條。
1. 火車晚點15分鐘，與接你的Tom 錯過。
2. 在火車上認(rèn)識的定居美國的華人夫婦Taylor 把你帶到Tom家，Tom不在；
3. 目前在Taylor 夫婦家；
4. 務(wù)必今晚打電話給你；電話號碼是64611128.
注意
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；
3. 信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tom,
I’m in New York!
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m in New York! It’s really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station. You may have left when my train arrived, a quarter behind the schedule.
Luckily, on the train I came across Mr. Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years. Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house.
As you happen to be out, I’ve decided to accept the Taylors’ offer to stay at their house for the night. I’ve decided to put up here for the night. They are very friendly to me, so don’t worry about me. I’ll be all right. It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：
這是一篇書信類作文，要點已經(jīng)給出。動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。我們所要做的就是按要點內(nèi)容給Tom留張便條。注意題目的要求，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要把表格中的要點都寫出來，不要有遺漏。寫作時盡量使用自己不會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮點說明】文章中表達的時候使用了詞組和句型：came across 遇上，happen to 碰巧做…put up 住宿，It’s really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station. 這句話用了it做形式主語， Luckily, on the train I came across Mr. Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years.這句話用了定語從句， Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening.這句話用了否定詞和比較級連用表示最高級的用法。