Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
We meet a lot of difficulities in our daily life.when problems arise ,do you give up or take a positive attitude towards them? Talk about your opinions.
注意：①無須寫標題； ②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個事例；
④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱;
⑤詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總字數(shù)。
(提示:請將寫作答案寫在答題卡上的相應位置，寫在此處無效。）

Answer 1

One possible version：
In our daily life, we have many difficulties and hardships that someone will be disappointened and give up the hope of success.However, when faced with difficulties and hardships,your attitude really counts.
Once I took part in a speech contest. So difficult was the topic that I completely had no idea about it..Even the time for preparation was limited. I felt hopeless and wanted to give up.But deep in my heart I didn’t want to be a coward. So I recovered my courage and took the speech contest seriously.I said to myself,”If I try my best,I won’t feel regretful, no  matter what the result is.” In the following days, I spared no effort and struggled for my goal. Eventurally my efforts paid off.  I won the first prize,which was much better than I had expected.\
Although the course of preparing for the contest is painful, I think I made a wise decision for I didn’t give up when facing difficulties.I owe my success to my bravery, persistence and positive attitude. As long as we face the difficulties bravery,”bright day” is just around the cormer.

試題分析：根據(jù)提示判斷本文屬于議論文范疇，所以在謀篇布局方面可以采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu)：首段提出問題，即面對困難時態(tài)度的重要性；第二段講述自己的事例；第三段進行總結(jié)概括，進一步深化主題。在寫作時要充分發(fā)揮想象，簡要敘述故事情節(jié)，而且還盡可能利用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)和適當?shù)倪B接詞語。注意在敘述事例時應該用一般過去時態(tài)，不要透露個人姓名和學校名稱以及注意字數(shù)和文體的限制。
【亮點說明】本篇范文層次清晰，段落分明。文章開門見山提出話題when faced with difficulties and hardships,your attitude really counts.，然后在下段中講述了自己參加演講比賽的一次經(jīng)歷，在本段中用了倒裝句So difficult was the topic that I completely had no idea about it..Even the time for preparation was limited.，條件狀語從句、讓步狀語從句If I try my best,I won’t feel regretful, no  matter what the result is.”等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)。然后在文章末段通過自己的事例得出結(jié)論：As long as we face the difficulties bravery,”bright day” is just around the cormer，重申了自己對困難的態(tài)度，明確了文章主題。此外文中count、eventually、persistence、pay off 等高級詞匯的使用增加了文章的亮點。