Question

假如你是李明，你從網(wǎng)上看到美國中學(xué)生Stephen計(jì)劃今年暑假來山東旅游，希望在
當(dāng)?shù)卣乙幻麑?dǎo)游，游覽一些文化特色鮮明的地方，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封電子郵件。
1．很高興Stephen能來山東，表示愿意做他的導(dǎo)游；
2．你的導(dǎo)游計(jì)劃和理由；
3．期盼他的回復(fù)。
要求：1. 100-120詞，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫。
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Stephen,
I'm Li Ming._______________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Stephen, 
I’m Li Ming, a high school student in China. I’m glad to learn that you intend to visit Shandong during the summer vacation.  As a native citizen, I’m willing to be your tour guide. 
Our schedule is as follows. 
I have designed a schedule of the trip that will please you. Your trip will last 7 days.  First, you will fly to Jinan, a popular tourist destination for its spring and long history.  I will show you around the major vacation spots, such as Quancheng Squire, Baotu Spring and the like.  After the 3-day visiting of Jinan, we will head for Mountain Tai, a symbol of Shandong. Just as an old proverb goes, “One who fails to reach the Mountain is not a hero”.  When reaching the top of it, you will be attracted/ absorbed in splendid views.  Finally, board the train to Qingdao where we can taste/enjoy the rest of the journey.  
If you are interested in my plan, please do not hesitate to contact me. Look forward to your reply soon. 
Yours,
Li Ming

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。假如你是李明，你從網(wǎng)上看到美國中學(xué)生Stephen計(jì)劃今年暑假來山東旅游，希望在當(dāng)?shù)卣乙幻麑?dǎo)游，游覽一些文化特色鮮明的地方，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封電子郵件。1．很高興Stephen能來山東，表示愿意做他的導(dǎo)游；2．你的導(dǎo)游計(jì)劃和理由；3．期盼他的回復(fù)。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100-120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】I’m glad to learn that you intend to visit Shandong during the summer vacation. 這里含有一個賓語從句。 I have designed a schedule of the trip that will please you. 這里含有一個定語從句。