Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.1 went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills. such as balancing a check—book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.
Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it—good facilities, helpful instructors. and a good library. The Students’ Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way ··· it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
學(xué)校最近組織了一次中美學(xué)生交流活動，你參加其中的“大學(xué)校園生活”討論。聽完Mike的發(fā)言之后，你準備寫一份發(fā)言稿，題目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，內(nèi)容要點包括：
1. 以約30個詞概括Mike的發(fā)言要點；
2. 然后以約120個詞談?wù)勀憷硐氲拇髮W(xué)生活，內(nèi)容包括：
(1) 對中學(xué)生活的感受；
(2) 理想的大學(xué)生活；
(3) 中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別，以及你打算如何適應(yīng)。
[寫作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評分標準]
概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫

Answer 1

Mike’s mother did almost everything for him when in high school, which brought him a hard time adjusting to the first-year college life. However, afterwards he got accustomed to it because of the academic atmosphere and colorful activities there.
As for me, what I do everyday is to study hard to enter a famous university, which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers. So traveling among classroom, dormitory and canteen is the routine work. Seldom do I have the time to do some activities. Anyway, unlike you, I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school, which is beneficial to adjust to the college life.
It seems to me the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and mentally，and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time.
As we all know，college is wildly different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to adulthood，but also the ivory tower to the real society. So an active part in activities，associations，as well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life.

試題分析：本文討論的話題是“大學(xué)校園生活”；首先你要描述你理想的大學(xué)生活：課程豐富，活動多樣；學(xué)術(shù)氛圍濃郁，研究和實驗的任務(wù)較重，都可以作為你寫作的重點。對中學(xué)生活的感受可以從學(xué)習(xí)壓力巨大，活動很少，課程考試多等方面綜合展開。如果適應(yīng)大學(xué)生活方面可以從先做準備，多了解大學(xué)生活，做好心理和思想上準備。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。
點評：半開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。