Question

假設(shè)你是John, 你的筆友李華口語(yǔ)不好，他來(lái)信請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀愕囊庖?jiàn)。你給他寫一封回信。提出以下看法和建議：
1. 在課堂上要積極發(fā)言，多爭(zhēng)取說(shuō)英語(yǔ)的機(jī)會(huì)。如果說(shuō)錯(cuò)，老師會(huì)幫助你糾正錯(cuò)誤。
2. 在課內(nèi)課外盡可能多地說(shuō)英語(yǔ)，熟能生巧。
3. 找一個(gè)喜歡說(shuō)英語(yǔ)的同學(xué)共同實(shí)踐，相互幫助。
4. 不要失去信心，不要怕說(shuō)錯(cuò)，不要怕別人譏笑。
5. 只要堅(jiān)持下去，一定能提高英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)水平。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120-150.
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3．信的開(kāi)頭界唯一為你寫好。
Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your letter. _________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
John

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your letter. I’m sorry to know that you have some trouble with your spoken English.
Here is some of my advice on improving your spoken English:
First of all, in class you must be active. Get every chance to speak. If you make any mistake, your teacher and your classmates will help you. Try to speak English in and after class as much as possible. As you know, practice makes perfect.
Why not find someone with whom you can practise speaking English? Thus you can help each other.
Don’t lose heart in your spoken English, and don’t be afraid of making any mistake or being laughed at. As long as you keep on speaking English, you are sure to improve your spoken English.
Yours sincerely,
John

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。