Question

假設(shè)你是張華，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來一名同學(xué)李明，他一時(shí)無法融入新的班集體中，感到很苦惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫封信(120字左右)：
1.幫他分析原因;  2.給他提出建議;  3.陳述你幫助他的具體打算.
Dear Li Ming，
I'm sorry to know that you feel uncomfortable at your new class.
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Best regards，
Yours truly，
Zhang Hua

Answer 1

Dear Li Ming，
I'm sorry to know that you feel uncomfortable at your new class. One of the reasons, I think, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates. Maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent. Therefore it is natural for you to feel lonely occasionally.
I believe, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. To start with, you can talk with people around you, and be brave to ask them questions that you don't know. Besides, comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends.
In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you.
I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible
Best regards,
Yours truly，
Zhang Hua

試題分析：考查半開放性作文，本文是關(guān)于給張華學(xué)習(xí)英語方面的建議，如口語訓(xùn)練，寫作等多個(gè)方面，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。