Question

假如你是李華，上周六你們班組織了一次志愿者活動(dòng)，去敬老院看望慰問老人。根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，講述這次活動(dòng)的情況，并談?wù)?u>自己的感受。 提示詞：gerocomium 敬老院， the elderly 老年人

Time	9:00---11:00,  last Saturday
Place	the gerocomium near our school
Volunteer work	took a lot of presents to,  performed program(表演節(jié)目)， talked with the elderly， ……..
feeling (感受)	……..

要求：1. 不少于60詞；2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;  3.開頭已經(jīng)給出。
Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the gerocomium（敬老院）.
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Answer 1

Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the gerocomium（敬老院）. My classmates and I went to the gerocomim near our school. We took a lot of presents to the elderly. Some of us performed wonderful program，such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join us and they were very happy. Some of us talked with the elderly seriously. They told us a lot about their lives.
All of us were happy because we did something good to others. In my opinion, we should spend more time helping the elderly. Love the elderly is Chinese people’s virtue.

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。