Question

國(guó)內(nèi)某英文報(bào)社開(kāi)設(shè)有專門幫助讀者解決困惑的求助信箱（letters to Mr. Helper）。假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)就以下學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱，給Mr. Helper寫一封信，尋求他的幫助。
1．自己學(xué)習(xí)已經(jīng)很努力，可父母還是不滿意；
2．學(xué)校幾乎每天都安排考試，心理壓力大。
注意：1．為使語(yǔ)句連貫，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
2．詞數(shù)100左右。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Helper,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Faced with great pressure in life, I’m writing to seek your help.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Helper,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Faced with great pressure in life, I’m writing to seek your help.
I spare no effort to study, hoping that I’ll become a university student in the near future. I do make some progress in my studies. However, my parents believe that what I’ve done is far from satisfactory. They expect me to do much better.
Almost every day I have to face endless examinations. Our teachers always say that only when we have made adequate preparation will we be able to succeed in the coming College Entrance Examination. Tired and helpless, I don’t think I can put up with such great pressure any more. I’d appreciate it if you can give me some advice.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。同時(shí)也屬于提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，就學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱，給Mr. Helper寫一封信，尋求他的幫助。包括1．自己學(xué)習(xí)已經(jīng)很努力，可父母還是不滿意； 2．學(xué)校幾乎每天都安排考試，心理壓力大。審題時(shí)注意本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。如范文里面的my parents believe that what I’ve done is far from satisfactory.和 I’d appreciate it if you can give me some advice.還有要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把文章串聯(lián)起來(lái)：象However,等等。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。