Question

假設(shè)你是吉林希望中學(xué)學(xué)生劉洋，得知2013年香港大學(xué)要在大陸進(jìn)行自主招生的消息后，有意向香港大學(xué)申請，參加自主招生考試。請用英語寫一封自薦信，主要包括：
1. 個人信息：男，18歲，高三學(xué)生
2. 性格、愛好與特長
3. 學(xué)習(xí)情況
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 信的開頭已為你寫好 (不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；
3. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
4. 參考詞匯：自主招生 independent recruitment
Dear Sir，
My name is Liu Yang, from Hope High School in Jilin.                       
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Yours sincerely，
Liu Yang

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
My name is Liu Yang, from Hope High School in Jilin. I’m glad to get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland, so I would like to apply for it.
I am eighteen, studying in Senior 3. I am sociable, easy－going and good at communicating with others. Besides, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and managed to get high grades. All these will enable me to continue my study in your university. What’s more, my hobbies are playing basketball and football and I am also good at playing the violin.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Liu Yang

試題分析：本文考查了自薦信，介紹自己的具體情況。審題時注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時，以第一人稱為主。寫作時注意語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯搭配。要盡量使用高級的詞匯和高級的句型讓文章更有層次，同時使用合適的連接詞讓各要點(diǎn)連接成流暢的短文，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號的使用。
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