Question

假定你是李華，你的一位美國(guó)朋友Jane在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國(guó)�，F(xiàn)在由你給她發(fā)E-mail，邀請(qǐng)她參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)，要點(diǎn)如下：
（1）祝賀她順利通過(guò)考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲；
（2）感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)；
（3）時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn)；
（4）地點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光俱樂(lè)部（The Sun Club）302房間；
（5）路線：在Jane所住賓館門(mén)口乘坐332路公共汽車(chē)可直達(dá)。
注意：（1）須包括以上主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；
（2）詞數(shù)：100左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
（3）參考詞匯：歡送會(huì) farewell party
Dear Jane,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jane,
　　Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English .We'll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
　　It's pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? We'll have dinner together. By the way，you may take Bus N o. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.
　　I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。目的是邀請(qǐng)Jane參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)，同時(shí)也屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要點(diǎn)時(shí)以時(shí)間為順序，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。象文章的句子：It's pity that you have to go back soon!就是it的形式主語(yǔ)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，本文以時(shí)間為序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。