Question

新課程實施以來，山東省率先取締了晚課，你所在的班級學生對是否取消晚課展開了一次討論。請結(jié)合下面的討論內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的看法。
贊成觀點 
1. 能夠給學生更多的自主學習和休息時間；
2. 有時間發(fā)展個人愛好。
反對觀點
1. 相對在家自習，在校學習效率更高；
2. 通過師生交流、生生交流，學習問題可以得到及時解決。
你的觀點……
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100-120左右，開頭已寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：autonomous learning自主學習
Recently, our class have held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled.                                                             
                    

Answer 1

Recently, our class have held a heated discussion about whether evening classes should be cancelled. Opinions vary from person to person.
　　Some of them are in favour of the idea that the evening classes should be cancelled. To begin with, canceling evening classes means they have more time for autonomous learning and resting. Besides, students will have more time to develop their hobbies such as reading, playing sports, drawing and so on.
　　However, others object to this idea. From their point of view, compared with studying at home, studying at school may lead to high study efficiency. What's more, the problems existing in study can be coped with as soon as possible by means of communicating with teachers and cooperating with classmates.
　　Weighing pros and cons, I prefer studying at home because I'm willing to form the habit of being independent and I'm inclined to arrange study time myself.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是是否取消晚課，給出了大部分要點，就是對贊成和反對的不同觀點，要考生給出自己的觀點。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是贊同的觀點，然后是反對的觀點，最后是自己的觀點，要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體。
點評：本文屬于正反方觀點作文，但是要點還是比較多的，考生可以自己添加部分。在分析部分已經(jīng)詳細說明了。在寫作的時候要適合合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使他們成為整體。要選擇高級的詞匯和句型，讓文章有變化，有層次。