Question

越來(lái)越多的高中生利用假期打工。請(qǐng)你就此現(xiàn)象從不同的角度談?wù)勂渲械睦�與弊（每項(xiàng)至少各三點(diǎn)）。（100字左右）
注意：段落開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。請(qǐng)將你的短文完整地寫在答題卡上。
There are some advantages for high school students to work in holidays.
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Answer 1

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There are some advantages for high school students to work part time in holidays. Firstly, they can make some pocket money to buy what they want and thus develop a sense of independence. Secondly, they can make new friends and learn to solve all kinds of problems themselves to improve their social skills.
However, some disadvantages are still existing. The students may not have enough time to rest. Meanwhile, they might spend less time on their school work so they could fall behind their classmates. Besides, their parents will often worry about their safety when they work with strangers alone.

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點(diǎn)評(píng)：一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。