Question

假設你是王明。近日，英語協(xié)會與校學生會聯(lián)合發(fā)起了“強健身體，從我做起”的活動。作為學生會主席，請你就此寫一封英文倡議書發(fā)表在校報英文版上，號召大家鍛煉身體，保持健康。
要點如下：
1．強健的身體使我們精力充沛，并能抵御疾��；
2．充分利用不同的時間做運動；
3．參加不同形式的體育活動并且堅持下去。
注意：1.詞數(shù)：120～150；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear fellow students，
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Wang  Ming
The Students’ Union

Answer 1

 Dear fellow students ，
As we all know，good health is more important than anything else in the world. A healthy body means that we have enough energy to study. In addition，it can help us to resist diseases. Recently，the English Club and the Students’ Union have called on us to take exercise. So，what can we do for ourselves?
First of all，we should make full use of our time in the morning and the breaks between classes. Of course，we can take exercise on the way to school and back home，too.
Secondly，we should take exercise by doing different kinds of sports，such as doing morning exercise，running，jumping and playing basketball. Every sport can help us to be more healthy.
Finally，no matter what sport you do，you should stick to it.
Let’s do some exercise together right now!
Wang Ming
The  Students’ Union

試題分析：本文是應用文中常見的倡議書。話題也是考生很熟悉的強健身體，從我做起，有很強的可寫性，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，考生只需要翻譯即可，同時也可以做適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，讓文章更有文采。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First of all,secondly,finally等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔的表達自己的觀點。
點評：本文是一封倡議書。具有很強的可寫性，內(nèi)容貼近考生的實際情況，考生有話可說，有話可寫。在寫作的過程中要注意使用合適的連接詞如，同時也要注意使用一些高級的解析如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。