Question

假設(shè)你是王明。近日，英語(yǔ)協(xié)會(huì)與校學(xué)生會(huì)聯(lián)合發(fā)起了“強(qiáng)健身體，從我做起”的活動(dòng)。作為學(xué)生會(huì)主席，請(qǐng)你就此寫(xiě)一封英文倡議書(shū)發(fā)表在校報(bào)英文版上，號(hào)召大家鍛煉身體，保持健康。
要點(diǎn)如下：
1．強(qiáng)健的身體使我們精力充沛，并能抵御疾病；
2．充分利用不同的時(shí)間做運(yùn)動(dòng)；
3．參加不同形式的體育活動(dòng)并且堅(jiān)持下去。
注意：1.詞數(shù)：120～150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear fellow students，
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Wang  Ming
The Students’ Union

Answer 1

 Dear fellow students ，
As we all know，good health is more important than anything else in the world. A healthy body means that we have enough energy to study. In addition，it can help us to resist diseases. Recently，the English Club and the Students’ Union have called on us to take exercise. So，what can we do for ourselves?
First of all，we should make full use of our time in the morning and the breaks between classes. Of course，we can take exercise on the way to school and back home，too.
Secondly，we should take exercise by doing different kinds of sports，such as doing morning exercise，running，jumping and playing basketball. Every sport can help us to be more healthy.
Finally，no matter what sport you do，you should stick to it.
Let’s do some exercise together right now!
Wang Ming
The  Students’ Union

試題分析：本文是應(yīng)用文中常見(jiàn)的倡議書(shū)。話題也是考生很熟悉的強(qiáng)健身體，從我做起，有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，考生只需要翻譯即可，同時(shí)也可以做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更有文采。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First of all,secondly,finally等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文是一封倡議書(shū)。具有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，內(nèi)容貼近考生的實(shí)際情況，考生有話可說(shuō)，有話可寫(xiě)。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中要注意使用合適的連接詞如，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)的解析如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。