Question

最近，速成雞事件再一次使食品安全成為了社會熱點話題之一。請你根據(jù)以下提示以Food Safety Issues為題寫一篇短文。
1. 市場上時常出現(xiàn)有安全隱患的食品。
2. 假冒偽劣商品嚴(yán)重?fù)p害人們的健康與生活（兩點）。
3. 應(yīng)當(dāng)采取有效措施（兩點）。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右；
2. 文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3. 生詞：假冒偽劣商品 fake commodities

Answer 1

Food Safety Issues
Nowadays, unsafe foods can be found, now and then, in the market, which has aroused a lot of public attention. It is reported that these foodstuff ranges from substandard milk powder, dyed steamed buns to pork with lean meat powder.（要點一）Fake commodities are harmful in many ways. To begin with, it is a waste of resource, especially in our country.（要點二）Second, it has bad effect on the reputation of the real manufacturers and brings about moral crisis. Above all, all that matters is food. People’s health and lives are severely threatened if someone buys some unsafe foodstuff.（要點三）Measures should be taken to deal with the problem. On the one hand, strict laws should be passed to punish the producers and the sellers.（要點四）On the other hand, consumers should be told to distinguish the genuine goods from the false ones. At the same time, the government should strengthen the supervision of all aspects of food.（要點五）I firmly believe this problem will be solved in the near future.

試題分析：這是一篇半開放性作文，是關(guān)于假冒偽劣商品的危害，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點不多，需要考生自己組織要點�？梢詮募倜皞瘟由唐返挠绊懙确矫娉霭l(fā)。故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
點評：班開放性作文的難點在于要自行組織要點，本文可以從不同方面的危害出發(fā)。理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。