Question

假如你是李紅，新轉(zhuǎn)入一所學校。請你根據(jù)下面表中的提示語寫一則日記，敘述這幾個星期以來新老師和同學對你各方面的關(guān)心、幫助以及你的感受和愿望。

生活方面	同學們從家中帶來當?shù)乜煽诘氖澄锝o我吃。 同學們帶我參觀校園，周末邀請我到他們家做客。 下午放學后，同學們經(jīng)常帶我去操場跑步、打排球。
思想方面	老師、同學們找我談心，和我交朋友。
學習方面	老師、同學在學業(yè)上幫助我
感受和愿望

注意：1.詞數(shù)：不少于60詞（日記開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；
3. 條理清楚、語句連貫；
4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。
6th June
My teacher and classmates have helped me a lot since I came here. _________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

不唯一
They brought me local foods from their homes. They were very delicious. My classmates showed me around our school. They even invited me to their homes to watch TV and enjoy dinners. After school they often ran and played volleyball with me in the playground. They came to talk with me when we were free. We have been good friends. They helped me with my lessons. When I had problems, I went to them for help. I feel very happy here. I hope to make more friends and make progress in my studies.

試題分析：這里日記的開頭已經(jīng)給出，因為日記是記錄已經(jīng)發(fā)生的事。所以通常都用一般過去式，但是，考生應該注意的是，如果你的日記是描寫風景等等的，是不用過去式的，要用一般現(xiàn)在時，也可以用一般將來式。內(nèi)容要點要全面，上下段要使用連接詞做到連貫。
點評：為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯誤，語法錯誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯的有多個從句組成的長句�？荚嚂r最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。