Question

在最近的一次主題為“中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)”的班會(huì)上，同學(xué)們對(duì)上網(wǎng)的利弊爭(zhēng)論不休，
不能統(tǒng)一。作為班長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列信息，做出總結(jié)。

大多數(shù)同學(xué)	少數(shù)同學(xué)
1.提倡課余時(shí)間上網(wǎng)	1.上網(wǎng)可以,但必須限時(shí)
2..網(wǎng)絡(luò)使我們交流方便，可獲得國內(nèi)外最新消息	2許多人上網(wǎng)時(shí)玩游戲而不是學(xué)習(xí).
3豐富了學(xué)生的業(yè)余生活	3.個(gè)別同學(xué)甚至為了上網(wǎng)而逃學(xué)

 注意：發(fā)言稿的開頭已給出，不計(jì)總數(shù)。 詞數(shù)：100左右
Attention,please!I’m going to give you a summary of today’s discussion
about going online.

Answer 1

不唯一
Attention, please! I’m going to give you a summary of today’s discussion about it.
Most students think we can go online as much as possible in our spare time. We can get the newest information both at home and abroad through the Internet. It is also convenient way for us to communicate with each other. In a word, the Internet makes our lives outside class colorful.
On the other hand, a few students only partly agree. They suggest a time limit on going online. They have found that many students go online only to play computer game. There are even one or two who are often absent from school for the days to spent time on the Internet.

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