Question

英語(yǔ)中有一句諺語(yǔ)“A friend in need is a friend in indeed.”你班正在舉行以”交友之道”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)以此為題并根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇120詞左右的演講稿。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示：1.對(duì)人要友善，用微笑吸引人；
2.要善解人意，設(shè)身處地地為別人著想。
3.不要吵架，遇事要商量
4.關(guān)心別人要?jiǎng)龠^(guò)關(guān)心自己
5.不要相信那些在危機(jī)時(shí)刻背離朋友的人。
6.根據(jù)你對(duì)交友之道的理解，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充，并發(fā)表自己的看法。
How to make friends
Good morning,everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “How to make friends”.
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Thank you for listening.

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How to make friends
Good morning, everyone!
The topic of my speech is”How to make friends”.
Everyone needs friends, so how to make real friends is very important to everyone. To make friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at someone and you are almost sure to get a smile in return. You should do you best to make a stranger feel at home, no matter where he happens to be. Put yourself in the other’s position and make him feel te is welcome. Besides, you should care more for others than for yourself.
When you don’t agree with people on certain matters, don’t argue but discuss with them. However, don’t believe in those who always betray their friend in trouble, because ‘A friend in need is a friend indeed’.
In my opinion, it is necessary to try to remember others’name,which will impress them. Never look down upon these who are poor. In a word, you should treasure the friendship between you and your friends, which is of great importance to keep up the friendship.
Thank you for listening.

試題分析：演講稿的主題部分應(yīng)該闡述清楚事情的緣由、結(jié)果和要求。第一部分的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該以詳細(xì)完整地介紹事情為主，具體地講，包括事情的發(fā)生、發(fā)展及結(jié)局。第二部分的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該提出個(gè)人看法等。發(fā)言稿以簡(jiǎn)單句為主要的表達(dá)形式。同時(shí)，演講稿的語(yǔ)言必須有感染力，所以演講稿可以使用祈使句、感嘆句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句等句式來(lái)達(dá)到這種目的。寫作時(shí)要注意適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后，用詞要得體，符合語(yǔ)言環(huán)境。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：選詞造句，避難選易。在要點(diǎn)、層次明確的情況下，選用自己最熟悉的單詞或句式來(lái)表達(dá)．如果不會(huì)用復(fù)雜句就用簡(jiǎn)單句表達(dá)要點(diǎn)．注意主謂語(yǔ)一致、人稱、數(shù)量、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)。完成后要認(rèn)真檢查，避免錯(cuò)誤。仔細(xì)閱讀全文，查找是否有錯(cuò)，注意時(shí)態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致。