Question

假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Eric在網(wǎng)上收看了今年的春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(Gala)，在給你的郵件中，Eric希望了解更多的“春晚”的情況。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，完成郵件回復(fù)。
要點(diǎn)：
1、“春晚”從1983年開始舉辦，中國人視之為精神大餐（big feast），已發(fā)展成大多數(shù)中國人很難忽略的大事。
節(jié)目包括歌舞、相聲（crosstalk）、小品（sketches）、雜技（acrobatics）……
3、你看過的最喜歡的某個“春晚”節(jié)目和原因。
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Answer 1

Dear Eric,
I’m glad to know you’ve watched the CCTV Spring Festival Gala this year and that you’ve got a very good impression of it.
The Spring Festival Gala, known as “Chun wan” to us Chinese, is a big feast for our eyes and ears. Ever since its first appearance in 1983, the Gala has developed into an event that most Chinese find it hard to ignore.
On New Year’s Eve every year, family members gather in front of the TV enjoying a wide variety of programs. Though they vary from year to year, the programs mostly include singing, dancing, crosstalk, sketches, acrobatics, etc, from which we have endless fun and entertainment.
Of all the programs, I especially like the magic shown by Liu Qian, a magician from Taiwan. I can tell why. Firstly, the show is pretty fantastic and amusing. Besides, we get a firm belief from his show that with magic, we all have the power to create magic in our lives. A nice idea, isn’t it?
Looking forward to hearing from you again.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：題目要求給美國朋友Eric寫一封回信，介紹春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會的有關(guān)情況。使用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，注意單復(fù)數(shù)、時態(tài)和語法知識的正確使用，不能出現(xiàn)拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。作文必須包含給出的所有要點(diǎn)，不能出現(xiàn)遺漏。
亮點(diǎn)說明：范文使用了較多的語法知識：賓語從句that you’ve got a very good impression of it；非謂語動詞known as “Chun wan”，enjoying a wide variety of programs，shown by Liu Qian；非限制性定語從句from which we have endless fun and entertainment；同位語從句that with magic, we all have the power to create magic in our lives；it作形式賓語find it hard to ignore等，使作文句式多樣，有層次感；
范文使用了很多短語：a big feast for；developed into；vary from...to...；Looking forward to；hearing from等，使作文充實(shí)，有說服力；
范文還注意使用Firstly；Besides來表示列舉，使作文顯得油條理性。