Question

星光中學(xué)（Xingguang High School）近期舉行了一次登山活動(dòng)。假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)寫一篇短文，報(bào)道此次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：
1.時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；
2.活動(dòng)的過程；
3.你對(duì)于這次活動(dòng)的評(píng)論。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右。
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!

2013年江西高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)題為英文報(bào)道，屬于文字類命題作文，以敘事為主，論說為輔。命題具有貼近生活，容易表達(dá)的特點(diǎn)。小題大做方面游刃有余。文字提示既有硬性要求（如“一次登山活”；“時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)：4月10日，大青山”，又給予考生一定的發(fā)揮空間（如：活動(dòng)的過程；你對(duì)于這次活動(dòng)的評(píng)論），為考生的思維多樣性和開放性奠定了基礎(chǔ)。話題體現(xiàn)了實(shí)用性、交際性、人文性、思想性，場(chǎng)景設(shè)計(jì)也體現(xiàn)了語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用宗旨。符合中學(xué)生日常生活、學(xué)習(xí)邏輯；符合課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)要求：高三學(xué)生畢業(yè)時(shí)，能根據(jù)文字、圖畫及圖表提供的信息寫短文或報(bào)告；還能寫語(yǔ)意連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文，敘述事情或表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度；同時(shí)能在寫作中達(dá)到文體規(guī)范的要求。
參考習(xí)作體現(xiàn)了“一二三”原則。“一”指短文中最好有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句或特殊句式（如：倒裝句Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us）.；“二”指若可能，再使用其他兩個(gè)復(fù)合句或非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)（如：復(fù)合句When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. / 非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.）“三”指三處亮點(diǎn)——較好的短語(yǔ)、詞組、連接詞或很得體的詞匯。(如：set out for；cheered；benefited…a lot; promoted等)