Question

作為一名高一學(xué)生，名叫李華，你對(duì)部分同學(xué)迷于玩電子游戲的現(xiàn)象很著急，便向一家英文報(bào)社編輯部寄了一封信，闡述了玩電子游戲機(jī)的壞處。
要點(diǎn)：
1. 電子游戲在學(xué)生中很流行，有些學(xué)生整天玩電子游戲，忘記了做作業(yè)，甚至逃學(xué)。
2. 玩電子游戲要花很多錢，有的經(jīng)常向父母要錢，有的經(jīng)常向同學(xué)借，有的甚至偷同學(xué)的錢。
3. 過(guò)分玩電子游戲使店主受益，對(duì)同學(xué)的學(xué)習(xí)和健康不利。
4. 希望政府采取措施加以制止。
注意: 1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 信件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù);
3. 可以適當(dāng)增節(jié)細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.
4. 提示詞：電子游戲video games；逃學(xué)play truant
Dear editor,
Now video games are very popular among the school students. _____________________________________
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Yours ever,
LiHua

Answer 1

Dear editor,
Now video games are very popular among the school students. Some students are so interested in the game that they spend all day playing. Sometimes they forget to do their homework and some even play truant. Each time they have to pay a great deal of money. In order to play video games they often ask their parents for money, borrow and even steal money from their classmates.
Too much video games playing needs time, money and energy. The others benefit a lot but it’s not good for the students’ study and health.
I do hope measures will be taken by the government to prevent students from playing video games.
Yours ever,
LiHua

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。