Question

假如你是李華，你的澳大利亞筆友Martin寫信向你詢問高中一年級(jí)開學(xué)近三個(gè)月來的學(xué)習(xí)生活情況。請根據(jù)下列提示給他寫一封回信，告訴他你的經(jīng)歷和收獲。
1． 遠(yuǎn)離父母，學(xué)會(huì)了獨(dú)立；
2． 結(jié)識(shí)了很多新朋友；
3． 在英語和數(shù)學(xué)方面取得很大進(jìn)步；
4． 課余時(shí)間參加各種活動(dòng)鍛煉自己，如英語角等。
注意：1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;
2. 詞數(shù): 120左右。
3. 信的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
參考詞匯：live on one’s own 自立    English Corner  英語角
Dear Martin,
How time flies! ……
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Martin,
How time flies! It is almost 3 months since I entered senior high school. I’m happy to tell you something about my school life.
My school is fifty kilometers away from my hometown. Not living with my parents, I have learned how to live on my own. And I’ve made some new friends, from whom I’ve learned a lot. I have made great progress in my English and math. Besides, in my spare time, I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities. For example, every week I go to the English Corner where I communicate with others in English. 
What about your school life? Would you like to share it with me?
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。