Question

假如你們學�！坝⒄Z愛好者俱樂部”將對“良好飲食習慣”這一話題進行討論。請根據(jù)下列提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點應包括：

部分同學的飲食習慣	良好的飲食習慣	個人看法
不吃早餐 愛吃零食 偏食 飲食過量	飲食多樣化 飲食定時定量	有助于身體健康 ……

注意：1. 發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
2. 發(fā)言稿開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù);
3. 詞數(shù)：100左右；
4. 參考詞匯: 偏食be particular about food   零食 snack
As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.
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That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s a very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.
To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
That’s all. Thank you!

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。